Old Republic Blues [Star Wars]

Requiem

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Sorry, I've been getting dunked on in Undertale. I'll have a character up tonight, like I said. Maybe after midnight if I get fresh with the character sheet.

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So, gonna have to wait until tomorrow for that character sheet. Friend who is a girl wants me to come over and keep her company, so... that's happening instead. Yeah.
 
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Requiem

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Okay, getting a character written up right now. Like for real, it's what I'm doing right now.

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I'll delete double posts, but I wanted to leave another post to send out the notification. Anyways, been working on the sheet, got sidetracked making a lightsaber, gonna put it into my character sheet when it's finished. I should have time tomorrow to full finish my sheet.
 
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Kratoury

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Got called in to work as something other than my actual position this morning, sorry. Post coming up within an hour or two.
 

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The first acceptance is... Tirin, with Kajin Saizhou. I was a bit iffy about you playing a mind-flayer, but you pulled through kid. Good job.
 

Requiem

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Name: Apollyas Req'sus
Species: Human
Age: 18
Gender: Male

Appearance: Apollyas is a character I made in preparation for Bioware's TOR MMO. I never got to use him because I never really played the game once it came out, but he translates well enough to this game anyways, so I'm double-dipping. Instead of merely linking an actual image of my character (as in, that’s actual art I had done of him), I'll do a real description.

Apollyas is a male Human Jedi who stands at roughly 5'11". He keeps his hair short and maintains a bit of fairly groomed stubble on his face at all times. He isn’t vain, but he does appreciate a good set of facial hair, at least within Jedi standards. He has green eyes, flecked with a small amount of yellow pigmentation. He has a scar on his back-left thigh from an explosion he barely escaped while on business for his former Master. Along with his groomed stubbly beard, Apollyas keeps his robes well-maintained. On the surface, they appear to be traditional Jedi robes worn by the Knights of the Old Republic, but within the brown and white folds are pockets carrying micro-tools and other sundry items the young Knight wishes to carry with him. He outfits himself for whatever jobs the Order asks him to complete, from fixing a broken lock on a door in the Dantooine Enclave he currently calls home to subtly ending a small crime wave in a neighboring system. He also carries within his robes a mixed bag of nuts at all times, “Just in case.”

He also wears a tough, water-tight pair of boots with a number of buckles on either shoe, allowing the Jedi to keep his feet dry in most instances. He also wears a white belt that features its own pockets. It isn’t on the level of a utility belt, but it does allow Apollyas to keep more sundry items he finds while away from the Enclave.

Lightsaber: The first incarnation of Apollyas’ Lightsaber is extremely similar to its second, current incarnation. In its first incarnation, Apollyas’ blade was made for unconventional length, allowing him to fight at a greater distance from his opponent while still maintaining his physical edge. The hilt itself is intentionally longer than the average Jedi’s, allowing it to be gripped wholly with both hands. The blade was also able to be “tuned”, allowing Apollyas to shorten it in combat. This caused a strain on the crystal. While the blade was more powerful, without proper control, the hilt was at risk of exploding. To counter this flaw, Apollyas added vents to the tip of the hilt’s emitter, hoping to reduce the strain. The switch on the first incarnation sits within saber’s lower grip, a poor design choice despite the benefit it gives in tuning the blade rather easily.

The second incarnation of Apollyas’ Lightsaber does not forgo the ability to “tune” the blade, but it does not focus as heavily on it. The hilt is still longer than average, allowing it to be gripped in two hands just as with the first incarnation, but this is more for Apollyas’ comfort in battle than it is for wielding a longer blade. The hilt also moves the switch so that it is between the two grips. Because of this, Apollyas is forced in battle to make a more conscious decision to tune his blade, preventing him from doing it as often as he had predicted he would have.

The blade itself remains more or less the same between incarnations. It is yellow with a deep-white core, signifying Apollyas as a Sentinel, as befits his special mix of Force talents and physical skills.

History: Apollyas grew up in the rough underbelly of Coruscant with his twin brother Reswyn and their father, Eventine. He did not know his mother, for she had gone missing after he and his brother were born. Apollyas' father did his best to raise his two sons, though it never seemed enough to him with his wife gone. He was not able to hold a steady job, nor was he able to kick any of his dirty habits he had picked up after leaving the Republic military. As the years rolled by, Apollyas and Reswyn fended for themselves as much as possible.

Shortly before being found by the Jedi Order, Apollyas and Reswyn attempted to steal credits from a local crime lord. As smart as the idea seemed in Apollyas' mind, nothing short of failure was waiting for him and his brother. Though the plan seemed to have work, a small fortune in credits having been stolen for the Req'sus family, nothing went by the crime lord unnoticed. Apollyas and Reswyn were quickly attacked and beaten within an inch of their lives. Had their father not stepped in and stopped the crime lord's thugs, the two young boys would have surely been killed. Though Eventine had prevented the boys' deaths, he was unable to stop the crime lord from seeking total vengeance. He decided to force the two young children, along with their father, into slavery.

Before the crime lord was able to sell the family, Jedi Master Grithok Kel’n intervened. A seasoned Jedi, Kel’n had taken few pupils in her life, serving the Order more through her skills and combat abilities than any untapped ability to teach. Upon seeing the injustice of the local crime lord’s attempts at slavery, Master Kel’n snatched the family away from their captors and sent word of the boys to the Jedi Council, having felt their Force sensitivity already. Though he loved his children, Eventine agreed that being with the Order would be better for them. He simply couldn’t take care of them as well as they needed. While their sensitivity was strong individually, Master Kel’n could not deny that the two boys were even stronger together, most likely due to the nature of their birth. They could have been gifted Consulars, but it was Reswyn’s reluctance to leave his father that prevented this path for the boys.

Not willing to leave a Force sensitive boy in the hands of a “less-than-capable” father, Master Kel’n proposed a simple plan to the Council. She would deliver Apollyas into their care and Eventine would take Reswyn to Dantooine. The enclave needed mechanics and there was time yet for Reswyn to turn to the Force, should he choose to. Keeping Reswyn with his father was not normal, but the Council agreed to the plan on the condition that Apollyas cut contact with his family. In the end, Apollyas agreed and took his first steps to becoming a true Jedi.

Trial: As the years past, it was clear that Apollyas’ connection to the Force had waned after being separated from his brother. He was not weaker for having lost this connection, but something did feel missing to the young Jedi all the same. It was this lack of connection that Master Kel’n had chosen to test.

The twi’lek had kept an eye on the boy as he trained, interested in his “lessened” Force abilities. The Council did not assign the boy to be her Padawan. In fact, she had asked for him herself, curious to figure out the boy’s problem. He was not a special case, Force sensitive twins had been discovered by the order before, but Apollyas’ “disconnect” prevented him from using the full breadth of his abilities. Kel’n believed it to be merely psychological, something the Jedi could work through if forced to. She did not announce that Apollyas’ Trials had begun, but merely began giving the boy tougher and tougher tasks, after gaining permission from the Council to begin.

At first, Kel’n left Apollyas in a room with spare parts of various types. Some for starships, others for speeder bikes, but curiously, the young man had also found Lightsaber parts. He knew he was not meant to attempt to build a Lightsaber until his Trials, but like his Master, Apollyas was naturally curious. The room he was in was tucked away without any camera to record his breaking of tradition. He did not wish to defy the Order, but getting to tinker with Lightsaber parts before the Trials was not something that happened to every Padawan.

In his combat training, Apollyas found that he was never satisfied with any particular length of his training blade. He intentionally switched between bouts, attempting to find the “right” length for him. He had learned that he appreciated longer blades, but was still effective with shorter ones as well. This prompted Apollyas to experiment as he created what would become the first incarnation of his Lightsaber. The hilt was a hodge podge of parts and lacked its crystals and power sources, but his skills as a mechanic kept it from falling apart in his hands. Hiding the unfinished hilt in his Padawan robes, Apollyas returned to Kel’n, hoping she would not sense what he considered to be his deception of her. The twi’lek went along with the ruse, intentionally leading the boy to the other parts he needed, as if she did not know she was doing so. The boy grabbed the power cell from a discarded blaster he found as he and his Master visited the barracks for the Temple’s guards; he took a crystal from a training saber when his Master left to gather their supplies for a routine journey into the nearby mountains. They had trained there many times.

When Apollyas found a moment alone, planned by his Master, he put his saber together. Inserting the crystal and the power cell with the micro-tools he kept in his pockets, Apollyas’ secret Lightsaber was complete. He had not used the Force in the hilt’s construction. This thought did not strike Apollyas as odd until after his Trials were over.

Upon finishing his blade, he tested its construction and the switch that allowed him to “tune” it. Its natural length was a few feet longer than most, while its tuned, shorter length was a few inches shy of the average saber. The construction seemed a success. Upon finishing his secret project, Apollyas knew he would have to reveal his deception to his Master. He searched for her at their camp, only to discover the signs of a struggle. What could have caused such a battle, Apollyas did not know. The mountains were relatively safe.

Kel’n did not tell her apprentice that a passing trader had forgotten to properly maintain the locks on the cages of the animals he sold, allowing a Thernbee to go free into the mountains. It lacked a mate and not a soul lived in the mountains that it could harm. The true Trials had begun for the young Jedi.

Apollyas followed the tracks of what seemed to be a fierce battle, the blood of two different beings mixing in patches on the ground. White fur had been scattered throughout the path. Eventually, the trail led Apollyas to a small cave, one that felt void of the Force. A pit within the Jedi’s heart opened as he stepped through the cave entrance. Quickly, the sounds of his Master and an unknown beast both crying out in pain reached his ears. Feeling a loss of control over his emotions, the Jedi instinctively reached for the makeshift Lightsaber that sat on his belt. With hilt in hand, Apollyas came upon a strange sight.

Before him stood not his Master and a beast, but a crying boy he found to be rather familiar. The boy’s clothes were dark, almost unnaturally so. He called to the boy, asking him how he had gotten into the cave, but the boy gave no answer. He reached out and grabbed the boy’s shoulder, hoping to calm him. The boy looked up into Apollyas’ face and smiled. In an instant, the boy had turned into a man, Lightsaber in hand. Apollyas thought he recognized the man, a mirror reflection of himself. Perhaps it was his father he faced or even his brother. Instead, Apollyas recognized what the man before him truly represented. As their blades clashed, the face of the man before him turned from the stubbly, short haired reflection of himself into the beautiful, flowing face of a woman with dark eyes. Her hair draped around her like a hood and the Lightsaber in her hand glowed red. Apollyas was facing his mother.

He did not know how he knew this to be true, he had no memories of his mother, but the figure before him merely mocked him saying that the truth remained buried, but never gone. It attacked, Apollyas barely able to keep up with the skills of this “Mother”. As they fought, the figure’s hair grew white and patchy. During a lull in the battle, it reached out towards Apollyas, beckoning him to come, suggesting an end to the fight. For an instant, Apollyas reached backed. As he did, the figure’s eyes flashed and its lips opened to send a mass of spittle into the Jedi’s face. Rather than being harmful, Apollyas somehow saw more clearly. The figure before him turned from the image of what he could only assume was his mother and into an animal he recognized as a Thernbee. Aware that he had been under a psychic attack from the beast and that its spit was dangerous, Apollyas instinctively reached toward the animal with the Force. His strength was beyond anything he had felt before. He pinned the Thernbee against a rocky pillar in the center of the cavern. Not wanting to kill it, he knocked its head against the pillar once more and set it on the ground carefully.

Remembering the danger of the animal’s spit, Apollyas reached into a nearby puddle and splashed water into his face. What remained of the spit had numbed a small portion of his ear, but Apollyas had avoided the worst of the Thernbee’s attack. Stepping out from behind the pillar, Master Kel’n smiled at her apprentice. She congratulated him on passing his Trials up to that moment. There was only one left for him to pass. She presented to him a small case filled with various Lightsaber parts.

Apollyas grew despondent and finally revealed to his Master that he had been deceiving her. He pulled his Lightsaber from his robes and knelt on the watery floor of the cavern, giving up the blade he had created to her, fully intending to give up the ways of the Jedi for his actions. Instead, she urged him to stand and gestured again to the case of parts. Kel’n told him what she had done, about the Council’s permission to do it, and explained that his Trials had begun days before. He stared at his makeshift Lightsaber with new eyes.

The Lightsaber in his hand was the culmination of his training before his Trials. The blade he would create at the end of his Trials would be the true representation of his connection to the Force, now made whole. By reaching back for the hand of his mother, Apollyas had accepted what he had only buried as a child: he was a Jedi like his mother before him. When he told his Master what he had witnessed during the psychic attack of the Thernbee, Kel’n merely nodded. She had her suspicions that he was the son of a Jedi Knight. The vision had proven this to her. When he told her that his mother’s Lightsaber had been red, Jedi Master Grithok Kel’n waved it off. Thernbees liked to toy with their victims before killing them. Apollyas was not convinced. Instead of focusing on the vision, Kel’n urged Apollyas to focus on more practical matters. The final construction of his Lightsaber.

Sitting down to meditate, Apollyas felt his connection to the Force surge forward once more. He had never been so intune with the Force, he felt it flowing through him now like a river. It wasn’t until that moment that Apollyas truly understood just how little of his potential he had been tapping into. He fell into a deep trance, feeling as though he were both outside of his body and inside it. Only in death could he be more one with the Force. The case of Lightsaber parts flew apart, leaving only the individual pieces of what would soon be his new hilt. The first incarnation of his blade flew from his hip, then separated into its individual components as well. In a swirl of Force energy, the pieces of his Lightsaber came together, no longer a mess of components barely sealed together. All that was missing was the crystal. Apollyas got to his feet and placed a palm on the central pillar in the cavern. Like bark from a tree, a small chunk of rock fell to the ground at the slightest touch. Beneath the rock had laid a yellow crystal, throbbing with energy. As though it had been made for this moment, the crystal left the rock and slipped into the waiting casing of Apollyas’ Lightsaber hilt.

As the Lightsaber sealed shut, Apollyas came out of his trance. He breathed the air of the cavern, taking in the dank, watery essence of it before finally stating:

“Well, I guess I’m a Jedi now. Can we take that thing back where it belongs, already?”

His former Master smiled, ready to present her first successful Jedi Knight to the Council.

Mechanical Statistics

Attributes
Physicality

Power: **
Finesse: ***
Endurance: **

Mental Acuity
Power: **
Finesse: ***
Endurance: **

Affinities
The Living Force: *
The Physical Force: *
The Unifying Force: *

Lightsaber Styles
Form I: Shii-Cho: *

Skills
Lightsaber Offence: 1
Lightsaber Defence: 1
Lightsaber Deflection: 1
Force Pull: 1
Repair: 1
Slicing: 1
 
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AndyM03

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Vital Statistics

Name:Ren Y’sera
Species:Twi’lek
Age:18
Gender:Male

Appearance:Ren had a charming smile none could look away from, but for the most part it was mostly due to awkwardness. In his youth his head tails had been sliced from slavers, wishing to use him as a mindless sex slave. The cybernetics inside him which replaced the vital cognitive functions of which these tails served were not visible, though other Twi’leks often looked at him as a disgusting outsider when they failed to communicate with him. Ren’s head now looked much like your average human, though a quick look behind his head will tell you another story. Or his skin. The dark beige often blended in with his desert clothes he refused to part with, flowing cloaks and neck scarves. They gave him a float to his movements that other Twi’leks dealt with due to their head tails. He enjoyed the excessive used of tape around his shins and wrists over clothing, mocking humans often by pretending to be a ‘mummy’. Otherwise under his cloak he was much prepared for combat, form fitting white under tunics with a brown belt. His cloak and scarf were grey. “They’re my beard,” He would say, “I’m much more mature then you” Before doing something his Master would certainly disapprove of.


Lightsaber: Although tempted to rip cybernetics out of his skull for parts, Ren made do with what he had on hand rather than on head. He liked to be far away from things that might cut limbs off, as he had been through that enough. His saber was made for reach and finesse, acting as both a one handed blade and a two hander. A bastard sword, a reject, much like Ren was torn between his Twi’lek appearance and being rejected by them. His master called him a poetic twat, but he liked its performance. It’s largely a basic cylindrical design, no curves or hidden twists. The activation button a little higher than on most blades, to save space on the blade, which is slightly thinner due to its length. The hilt cusps the beam in a descending crescent shape, leaving the back half covered and the front open. The colour of the blade is a deep orange, so Ren can bring a piece of the desert world Ryloth with him through his travels, and more importantly, another reminder that his past moves with him.

( I really struggled writing this. I’m decent with The Old Republic Lore and such but not really enough to give this lightsabre a life of its own. I did some research though)


History:
At birth Ren lived a standard life as the son of a moisture farmer. Hard labour at a young age and helping out wherever his hands could. There were happy times though. Like when dad failed starting his speeder bike after the third time and fell off, face first into the sand. Or when his mum would bake treats when dad and I were under the impression we couldn’t budget for luxuries this month. She was a trickster that woman. Both could still be alive for all I know, but they probably weren’t, something told him that, and it wasn’t just cynicism. This gut feeling would eventually be revealed as the Force. But Ren didn’t know that while he was dragged from home, snatched off of the farm in broad daylight. All he knew was that his screams weren’t loud enough to block the scary noises and blaster noises.

If Ren was a lucky boy, he’d have been a sex slave. But unfortunately he was bought by a twisted scientist, a human looking to get a greater understanding of the Twi’lek head tails. Ren was to be the no tail test subject. If you knew much about Twi’lek anatomy, then you would know this would be akin to cutting out a significant portion of one’s brain. An excuse Ren would use whenever he had trouble with Jedi theoretical tests or philosophy. Ren was a vegetable after this operation, barely alive with only his most simple bodily functions operating. His doctor was not entirely heartless, he decided to collaborate with his more mechanical friend to make greater use of this failed test subject. In other words, the doctor didn’t quite like being served a loss when the slavers sold Ren as a ‘pinnacle of Twi’lek youth’ in regards to his strong features at such a young age. In for a penny, in for a pound. Unfortunately that pound of flesh was Ren. After the implant procedure was done, Ren was still seemingly lifeless. In a fit of anger, the doctor decided to leave Ren on the streets outside his house.

“If he won’t live by my hand, he won’t die by it either!” he shouted.
Not that Ren remembered that anyway. Or any of this.

Ren was born to his knowledge at the age of six. With no head tails, cybernetics in his brain, and a few mutations from the doctor which were intended to wake him up through muscle stimulation and growth. While most Twi’leks passed him on the street as though he were invisible, a Jedi on business in Ryloth noticed him. Sensing life and a strong aura of the force surrounding him, he took the boy, and with proper patience and healing, the cybernetics kicked in, restoring brain functions completely.

Ren didn’t even realised he was being trained when it begun. With no connection to his past family, the Jedi who picked him up realised was a prime candidate Ren would be for the Jedi order. During this year on Ryloth together, Ren acted as the Jedi’s padawan. When the two came to Coruscant, the Temple allowed the training to continue, to Ren’s joy. Although the countless rules and strictness of the temple weighed on Ren, the joy of his time in the outer rim with his master kept him strong. He knew he had a future, even if he couldn’t recall his past.


Trial: (The Trial of Sacrifice) Ren’s master had already witnessed him go through many physical trials over his time with him. Even Ren’s diligence with the temple had been observed by many, despite him knowing Ren’s urges to be freer than the temple allowed. His master surprised him one day by telling him he would be able to build his lightsabre today. Knowing that a trial would be involved, Ren was initially confused. He was given a variety of tools and equipment that he would need, but otherwise he was left in total peace. Growing suspicious of it all, when he finished his lightsabre he could hardly believe it turned on when it did. The orange glow was greater than he could ever imagine, it’s light covering his bland clothing in colour and life.

And that’s when the voice came.

“Cut off your hand.”
Ren jumped, shocked, surprised, and fulfilled knowing that his trial was finally starting. But then the words sunk in.
“Cut off your hand. Now.”

The voice was familiar yet so foreign. One of the masters he hadn’t been full acquainted with maybe?
“Who is this?” I demanded. “I’ll not be a slave to a voice without reason.”

Silence.

Silence.

Ren’s head started ringing. What was left of his head tails started burning, though surely this was all an illusion of his mind. Regardless he felt weaker than he ever had, falling to one knee. He had lived his life as broken goods, he felt it impossible to further damage himself. Despite being so fortunate (And unfortunate) with fate, Ren believed firmly in the hands that had made his future. Hands that were held back when masters were right to be slapped in the face for their cruelty.

But the masters were kind, really. In their hearts, even when they didn’t seem it.


“Well, the order says not to gamble, oh mysterious voice, but if the Order begs me too, I will believe you.”

Outstretching my arm, with the blade in my hand, affirming my grip before I made the biggest mistake of my life (probably), I prepared to slice.

Just as the blade was about to cut my arm, it disappeared, leaving me with just the hilt.

Mechanical Statistics

Attributes
Physicality
Power: ***
Finesse: **
Endurance: ***

Mental Acuity
Power: ***
Finesse: *
Endurance: **

Affinities
The Living Force: **

The Physical Force: *

The Unifying Force:

Lightsaber Styles
Form I: Shii-Cho:*

Skills

Lightsaber Offence I
Lightsaber Defence I
Lightsaber Deflection I

Force Acrobatics (I’m assuming Dash and Jump are the same mechanically, which is what I’m getting at)
Force Push
Cybernetic Thinking: Math and other objective thinking comes quickly to Ren, due to the implants in his brain.
 

Kratoury

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Alrighty, Easy you're up. I was a bit hesitant regarding your character at first, but your trial section tipped me over to accepting you. Congratulations.

Also, you may have noticed that I am making fairly short posts. This is because I'm lazy and have no drive as a human being to do anything other than sip coffee and jerk off with alarming frequency. So don't worry, there's not been a decay in my writing ability.
 
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AndyM03

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Screw you Kratour I wrote my thing when I was drunk and now i'm drunk again and back with fiery fury.
Accept some lovable black men, who are my friends plz and if I'm still ignored I'll re-do my character sober I promise.
 

Requiem

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Kratour is doing things at Kratour speed, he still fully intends to do the RP. Just be patient boyos
 
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